Feedback for Helen Xiu

Desktop 1

Very legible, love the open space with the sky and stars. One suggestion is to maybe move the text in a tiny bit as it looks a little bit close to the edge, although I think full screen it would probably be fine.

Desktop 2 and 3

These are also very legible, I would move the text a little bit up on the second one as the postcard is very image and text heavy on the lower half.

Overall Feedback

It would be nice to see variation in the typefaces. I like how the text placement is different on all of them too. I also think the overall layout of all three is very similar but the imagery being all very different helps.